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A poem for Evoke(you can do one too)

Where do I feel it the most, I haven't decided,
My heart, my mind and my feelings are all excited.
The manic part of this panic
has my mind filled with fire,
but if it helps another,
then I say light it.

For me even that short poem was terribly difficult, and to be honest, I only did it to inspire other poems. It took me about 30 minutes, lol, just because I had to make it rhyme. My, point is, take a shot yourself! I got up here and stuck that up, now you give it a try! It will probably take you a lot less time, and it makes you feel pretty good to get it completed.

(Please, If your comments or poem are very long, could you create a discussion and link us?

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Comment by Sarah O.Connor Panamericana on May 1, 2010 at 11:04pm
Here is another dark but beautiful poem for you in the form of a picture:
Me

Comment by A.V.Koshy on May 1, 2010 at 11:06pm
yes. dark but beautiful.
Comment by Gabriel Martin on May 1, 2010 at 11:06pm
thats worth at least 1000 words, lol
Comment by A.V.Koshy on May 1, 2010 at 11:06pm
do you like my poem sarah?
Comment by Sarah O.Connor Panamericana on May 1, 2010 at 11:20pm
yes, very much so,
would you write a short one to go with that picture?
Comment by Michele Baron on May 1, 2010 at 11:45pm
she stares across the sands.
where are the children?
she watches over the sands.
if they were there, what would they eat?
she guards the desert sands.
and who would teach them?
she longs for greener lands.
if there were schools, what would they learn?
she stares, beside the rail.
when will a chance come?
her hand rests on the fence.
can there be peace?
she stands alone at post.
who stands beside her?
the sands have stood alone throughout the ages.
will she wait, and hear, and speak?
can there be peace?
Comment by Gabriel Martin on May 1, 2010 at 11:49pm
Now that was good stuff! Thanks so much Michele
Comment by Michele Baron on May 1, 2010 at 11:55pm
:)
Comment by Sarah O.Connor Panamericana on May 1, 2010 at 11:59pm
Thank you very much Koshy,
I'm flattered that you would write such a piece for me.

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